I must admit, this remains one of my favorite poems from my own collection. Of the poems I’ve ever written, it’s the one I had the least trouble sharing with others. Of the poems I’ve written, few others make me feel consistently proud of myself. Not that there’s anything particularly clever, deep, or resonant about it, but there’s something pretty and honest there that makes it stand out from a lot of my other written works.
It’s also amusing to reminisce on how this poem came about. I was on a school field-trip, and as we’d been strongly encouraged to meticulously journal all that we experienced on the trip, I was in a deep pen-and-paper sort of mood, which involved a lot of notes, comments, reflections and stories, but also resulted in several more creative endeavors, including the odd poem. We visited some truly fascinating caves in New Mexico. I’ve always liked caves, but these were especially intriguing, and as we boarded the bus to leave I determined to attempt to capture my rapturous state with a poem. What resulted was unexpected, but not dissatisfying.
At any rate, I get the feeling this one will be particularly easy for you, my friendly readers, to empathize with, whether you also write or not.
Explaining it is an Art
How can I describe
The glories of the caves
Would that I knew the answer
Would there was a way
Might I try to liken it
To some other great sight
‘Twould not do it justice
Would not explain it right
Perhaps some flashy words
To make the heart believe
‘Tis a waste of time
For no words come to me
“Cool” fails abysmally
“Awesome” does little better
My mind has locked away the awe
My tongue now lies in fetters
Would that one could simply
Feel from heart to heart
But our hearts are bound by words
So explaining it’s an art.
Beautiful! And I actually understood this one without you needing to explain it to me!